graveyardes's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Key to escape]

Not very fun or interesting. There isn't a story to help me get involved, and the puzzling is tedious and annoying. A puzzle should be solvable based on information previously inherited in the game. Like, introduce a hint in dialog or text early on (NOT in the form of an on-screen text box) that the player will have to remember to solve a puzzle later.

So yeah, this isn't very good. Try again.

[Memorization3000]

Not anything new or interesting, but good for what it is. Keep making games!

philanderson556 responds:

Ok sure will.

[Other Side]

Wow, simple and fun! No real criticism, but some levels are a tiny bit imperfect, giving the player too much time to correct the position of the characters at the end.

Congrats, anyway! This is a really fun game.

[Simultaneism]

Should really have checkpoints.

If it had checkpoints, it'd be a four star game.

[MOBS, INC.]

I really like it, though I don't know how to avoid getting verbal warnings...maybe I overlooked something.

Wish there was more than one stage though.

[Mission Impossible]

Solid idea, man, but it's not fun. It's really slow paced, clicking things is weird, it's not interesting just to avoid obstacles.

Maybe if it were fast paced, not insta-kill, not glitchy, etc., then it'd be good.

[Run X]

I'd like to see it be a lot faster paced, if everything is an instant kill. You know the game "Space Is Key"? That game had everything kill you, but respawns were instant, so it didn't really bother the player.

If you're gonna keep it at the pace it is, I'd recommend swapping the insta-kill out for a health bar. Maybe 5 hits to die? It's just that the jump isn't long enough to traverse some obstacles and having to restart every time is annoying as hell.

Also, music after you lose would be cool!

jandersonrs responds:

Thank You!

[Battle Area]

This game gave me a headache. That'd just be a completely personal thing, but the controls are extremely annoying and glossy as hell, the designs for the map is really boring.

I like story in shooter games, but I get it if you don't wanna bother. Even so, the gameplay just doesn't work. I end up trying to turn left a little bit and do a 360. I recommend reworking this whole submission.